Friday, November 27, 2009

The Other Side

Nobody knows its empty
This mask of smile I wear
The real one is left in the past
Because it has left me there

Nobody knows my feelings
They wont even see my tears
When they think that I am laughin
I wish if I could laugh

Nobody knows its painful
They think that I am strong enough
They say that this wont hurt me
But I wonder if they were wrong

Nobody knows I am praying
Which changes my mind
They think I have left everything go
When they left me behind

Nobody knows how my life is
They think that I am free of all
But I feel that I am bound,
With chains of mystery

Nobody knows of me well
They say that I can do it own my own
But they don’t know how I feel
When I am alone..


Shravan said...

welcome to the blogsphere :) enjoy and do come up with nice and interesting posts :) good luck and cheers :)

btw, that is a nice post there !

lakshmi said...

Hi Nikhil
a beautiful start into the world of blogging
a very nice poem..........expresses aptly the heart of a teenager.........great going
good day to you

KParthasarathi said...

Nice one.I liked it

Anonymous said...

A warm welcome..
a lovely poem to begin with..

keep writing..

Mind Writer! said...

Hi Nikhil!

Welcome to the world of blogging! Nice poem to start with. Get going!


Nikhil said...

thanks shravan bro :)

Nikhil said...

hi lakshmi thank you for the comment and glad you liked my small poem.. good day to you as well :)

Nikhil said...

thank you for liking it k parthasarathi

Nikhil said...

thank you for the welcome slow processor and happy to know that you liked my attempt :)

Nikhil said...

hi mind writer and thanks :-)

Anya said...

Lovely lines written :-)

Mind Writer! said...

Hello Nikhil! Tagged you! I guess it's the first tag of your blogging career! Give us a chance to know you better!

chocolate lover said...

That was really awesome
loved it :))
gr8 job..

Nikhil said...

mind writer yes indeed, thats the first tag, but i prefer to do the tag sometime later.. hope you dont mind.. its just one post over here and see, i am not updating :-( busy with schools :(

Nikhil said...

hello chocolate lover thank you and welcome to this blog :)

Nikhil said...

hello anya thank you for the appreciation :) hope to see you around :-)