Nobody knows its empty
This mask of smile I wear
The real one is left in the past
Because it has left me there
Nobody knows my feelings
They wont even see my tears
When they think that I am laughin
I wish if I could laugh
Nobody knows its painful
They think that I am strong enough
They say that this wont hurt me
But I wonder if they were wrong
Nobody knows I am praying
Which changes my mind
They think I have left everything go
When they left me behind
Nobody knows how my life is
They think that I am free of all
But I feel that I am bound,
With chains of mystery
Nobody knows of me well
They say that I can do it own my own
But they don’t know how I feel
When I am alone..
16 comments:
welcome to the blogsphere :) enjoy and do come up with nice and interesting posts :) good luck and cheers :)
btw, that is a nice post there !
Hi Nikhil
a beautiful start into the world of blogging
a very nice poem..........expresses aptly the heart of a teenager.........great going
good day to you
Nice one.I liked it
A warm welcome..
a lovely poem to begin with..
keep writing..
Hi Nikhil!
Welcome to the world of blogging! Nice poem to start with. Get going!
Lopa
thanks shravan bro :)
hi lakshmi thank you for the comment and glad you liked my small poem.. good day to you as well :)
thank you for liking it k parthasarathi
thank you for the welcome slow processor and happy to know that you liked my attempt :)
hi mind writer and thanks :-)
Lovely lines written :-)
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Hello Nikhil! Tagged you! I guess it's the first tag of your blogging career! Give us a chance to know you better!
http://shomoita-dreamer.blogspot.com/2009/12/second-tag-of-my-blogging-career.html
hi..
That was really awesome
loved it :))
gr8 job..
mind writer yes indeed, thats the first tag, but i prefer to do the tag sometime later.. hope you dont mind.. its just one post over here and see, i am not updating :-( busy with schools :(
hello chocolate lover thank you and welcome to this blog :)
hello anya thank you for the appreciation :) hope to see you around :-)
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